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Tansy A. H. Pye

"Ode to Bullies (poem)" by Tansy A. H. Pye

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I was very badly bullied in school. It has affected all of my work. This was a small revenge. Fade to black is my bigger revenge. Yes the girl in that story is me:)
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Ode to my Bullys

When you yell those rude names at me
Do you think I feel pain?
Do you expect me to cry?
Or to lie down and die?
I could turn round and punch you.
Or break both your legs
Cut open your lips pull your teeth one by one.
Rip out your eyes, break open your skull
Reach down through your throat and tear out your lungs.
What a nice daydream, I’m thinking of you
When I smile at your taunting,
I’m thinking what I’ll do.
I imagine you dying, lying face down in the mud.
Cut into pieces and covered in blood.
So watch out behind you.
Coz I’ll get you one day.
My imagination is loaded.
I’ll blow you away.

←- In The Blood - Prologue | Different Dark (poem) -→

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24 Mar 200345 N30-B4k4 <scwewywabbit2000@yah...com>
This poem is very meaningful, but by all means, it is NOT an ode as an ode is long and complex.
10 Apr 200345 Anonymous
I think this poem is very meanfull! It really tells those bullies!! I really like your poem thanks for sharing it!!
1 Aug 2003:-) Camilla 'Motone' Whitney
Feel sorry for those suckas.
16 Nov 200345 Oli
It was okay but i could do better
20 Nov 200345 Sexy <nomant2002@yah...yahoocom>
Tis sucs please change the name
8 Dec 200345 Chigaliga
I really like your poem it touched my heart and sole! i have never been bullied but they are nasty little buggers!!!!!!!!!!!!
6 Jul 200645 Dumdum
That it disturbing, but pretty good.
3 Aug 200645 Bloody Rose
Hahahahaha OMG that was great!!!!!!!!!! Awesome stuff man awesome stuff!!!
28 May 200845 I feel my friends pain
Thank-you so much for writing this peom it has really touched me and my friend
11 Dec 200845 Anon.
that is really sweet but disturbing
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About 'Ode to Bullies (poem)':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Tansy A. H. Pye
 • Copyright: ©Tansy A. H. Pye. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Bullies, Revenge, Gore, Blood
 • Views: 825


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